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(Message started by: tkc1989 on Jul 3^rd, 2006, 12:15pm)

Title: New Song
Post by tkc1989 on Jul 3^rd, 2006, 12:15pm

Here's a new one i wrote...won't go into detail on what its about, but i've already written music for it which i will record very soon hopefully :) i'd love to know what you think

And I�ve so much left to say,
But will you ever listen?
�Cause I want to see you everyday,
I want to share in your intentions.
But you say you�re passed that stage,
And I can never change your mind�

And our time it goes too fast
Let�s go back to September�
I want to take you back
Want to make you remember,
What you saw in me�

All this talk of moving on,
It leaves me feeling broken.
Because I know he�ll let you down,
But he�s the one you�ve chosen.
And you say you�re passed that stage,
And I can never change your mind�

And our time it goes too fast
Let�s go back to September�
I want to take you back
Want to make you remember,
What you saw in me�

And I�ll still be around
Long after he lets you down
Yeah I�ll still be around
When this world lets you down
And I�ll still be around
Long after he lets you down
Yeah I�ll still be around
When this world lets you down

Title: Re: New Song
Post by Shannon on Jul 3^rd, 2006, 12:40pm

wow ... that's lovely in a sad, heartbroken way. Beautiful lyrics. You're a very talented songwriter.

Title: Re: New Song
Post by DizzyNess on Jul 3^rd, 2006, 6:31pm

Awww..... :'(

Title: Re: New Song
Post by Rockin_Munchkin on Jul 5^th, 2006, 8:41am

Wow! :oThat 's very good. I'd love to hear what it sounds like.

Title: Re: New Song
Post by tkc1989 on Jul 5^th, 2006, 11:59am

hey thanks guys, i've recorded a demo onto tape and as soon as i figure out how to get it onto pc i'll post it :)

Title: Re: New Song
Post by tkc1989 on Jul 8^th, 2006, 4:22am

well here's the demo, its pretty crappy really cause i did everything in one take, but its just a demo...

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=BCFCFAAD7F7F476E